2018年6月14日木曜日

Young people perspective

Young people perspective
I should pay tax for elderly people. But elderly people are increasing year by year. So I have to work more and more. And I should take care of my parents. I can't marry and give birth. This situation make the society aging.

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  1. Dear Miyako,
    You gathered some good information, but you need to use, at least, TWO sources to inform the particular perspective that you choose, and the perspective should be from a first person point of view. For example, you should pretend that YOU are someone who must take care of an older family member. From various cases you research, put together a believable fictionalized case.

    You will have to cite your sources using APA style. For that, make use of citationmachine.net .

    Also, be careful about plagiarism. It's clear that you copied your posting from Wikipedia's page on "Aging in Japan":

    "In 2015, 177,600 people between the ages of 15 and 29 were caring directly for an older family member.[35] However, the migration of young people into Japan's major cities, the entrance of women into the workforce, and the increasing cost of care for both young and old dependents have required new solutions, including nursing homes, adult daycare centers, and home health programs.[36] Every year Japan closes 400 primary and secondary schools, converting some of them to care centers for the elderly.[37]"

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